At first I didn't like the way the first model's hands are on, what I'm assuming is, the headboard...it breaks the dimension of the photo...but after looking it over a couple of more times and trying to imagine it with her hands down I realized the break is actually really nicely done. Besides the composition of the photo (I love the colors too, btw) I really enjoy the contrast between the models in emotion.
The first model seems like she's just waking, maybe just starting to listen to some music and is ready to dance through her morning routine and face the day head-on. The second model seems a little more cynical, ready for the comfort of bed to help rid her of the days stress. It's funny how our world revolves around the bed when you stop to think about it, well the bed & sleep, and this photo brought me full circle from morning to evening. Energy and the need to rest.
If nothing else I think that's what makes good photography. When you can see a story within a photo and don't just stare at the models as if they were things, they aren't, they're part of a story and I enjoyed this one very much--even if it's not the 'right' story. It's the people looking at this calling it porn that have turned it into porn in their own heads, and really that's just sad. Congratulations on a well deserved DD.